Rate the haiku above you
 

Snowflakes become one
As they float through the wind
Into a starless night

4/5
Nice imagery and not a word out of place.

A cool breeze flutters
through the leaves of the olives
My tears dry in the air

1/5
Not a haiku.

perplexed and confused
it's discombobulating
check your syllables

he followed the rules
and made a haiku oh yeah
five out of five bro

4/5
Nice.You followed the rules too !


using just three lines

Il Duce must post like this

counting syllables

8/10

A fairly rare post
Rarer still, lisnaholic
This dude is the ****

You guys are using 3-5-3 haikus? Schmucks! it's 5-7-5 or nothin!

I touch myself when
I think of you baby
Locked in my cellar

You didnt rate mine you goon!

^ :laughing: Thanks !
7 or 8 out of 10, depending on how many syllables there are in *****



^ 6/10. Counting out on my fingers, I think you dropped a syllable from your middle line. Also, I think the previous ones log in at 5-7-5. That was certainly my intention.
What would the ancient Japanese masters have to say about the topic of your haiku ? :yikes:


nice guy, Doctor Soft

something about his father

I can`t quite recall

Two syllables... I think I forgot I was doing 5-7-5.