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Paedantic Basterd 12-26-2011 07:11 PM

0/5. No haiku in sight.

Two, And We'd Be Bananas


If our D.N.A.
Was off by just one percent
We would be dolphins.

ThePhanastasio 12-26-2011 08:27 PM

:laughing:

5/5

Maybe you would be
A dolphin; swimming, swimming...
but one raped Hank Hill.

FaSho 12-26-2011 08:39 PM

3.5/5

A new season of
Arrested Development
Hook stuck in stair car

DoctorSoft 12-26-2011 08:51 PM

3/5 I feel it lacks emotional depth Fasho.

Once, so beautiful
Branches dancing with the wind
Now passing and grey

Lisnaholic 12-27-2011 06:21 AM

^ 9/10.
I like the way your image focuses on a natural image, like a Japanese water-colour. Only beaten by the best so far, from Pedestrian.
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Autumn leaves; cornflakes
Left out in a bowl of rain
Too wet for breakfast

DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 11:30 AM

Oddly unsettling 8/10

Grass pokes through the edge
Of the newly melted snow
A calm winter day

Paedantic Basterd 12-27-2011 11:39 AM

1/5. Not a haiku.

Why Is It Milk

A coconut is
A lot more like a fruit than
it is like a cow.


DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 11:43 AM

Well **** close enough

Queen Boo 12-27-2011 11:45 AM

10/10 I like cows.


Where did my boobs go?
They were here a month ago...
Oh, I could just cry.

DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 11:54 AM

5/10 no ryming brah

Boobs are weird looking
Small lumps of fat typically
On female bodies


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