Would This Catch Your Attention?

Itsme · 08-26-2011, 01:30 PM

I made a flyer and pinned it up at the music building of a local university as well as a couple at the community college which I attend. Here is what it looks like, tell me whether it would peak your interest had you noticed it on a corkboard whilst walking to class or to practice.

Violinist looking for like-minded musicians

Influences include:

Malipiero
Shostakovich
Arvo Part
Gavin Bryers
Clogs
Ned Rorem
George Crumb
Schubert
Bach
Vivaldi
The Mars Volta
The Flying Luttenbachers
Neurosis
Ballaké Sissoko
Mike Pride’s From Bacteria to Boys
Aaron Goldberg
The Silk Road Ensemble
Sunn 0)))
Boris
Merzbow
Opeth
Joshua Abrams
Terry Riley
Comus
Grails (Particularly their album “Black Tar Prophesies 1, 2 and 3” )
Sir Richard Bishop
Stockhausen
John Cage
Ravi Shankar
and many more that won’t fit on this flyer

IF INTERESTED IN THROWING SOME IDEAS BACK AND FORTH CONCERNING MUSICAL COLLABORATION PLEASE CALL (***)***-****

Freebase Dali · 08-26-2011, 03:47 PM

Yes.
Unfortunately for you, most of the kids at your college probably only know about 2 or 3 off that list. Good luck.

~~antiboredom101~~ · 08-26-2011, 04:42 PM

^ what up freebase! Just got back!

Yes, that is a good flyer. Might want to add some graphics.

Itsme · 08-26-2011, 05:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Freebase Dali

Yes.
Unfortunately for you, most of the kids at your college probably only know about 2 or 3 off that list. Good luck.

This is true, but I'm hoping for the best, especially since I put the majority in the university music building.

We'll see though.

Itsme · 08-26-2011, 07:29 PM

This would only catch one person's attention?
My vision is doomed....

hip hop bunny hop · 08-26-2011, 09:58 PM

It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!"

CanwllCorfe · 08-26-2011, 10:10 PM

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Originally Posted by hip hop bunny hop

It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!"

Yes. Simple is always better. It just looks like you're namedropping, and doing too much of it. It should just say "Violinist looking for like-minded musicians" and then the last line with your number, with maybe a line or two about what you're looking for. Once you get in touch with them, then you can give them the pertinent details.

Blarobbarg · 08-26-2011, 10:10 PM

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Originally Posted by hip hop bunny hop

It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!"

I actually agree with this.

The flyer is good and it would definitely catch my interest, but you'll have an easier time going with Bunny's sugestion. If you're looking for perfect but not easy, I suppose your flier works just fine.

~~Farfisa~~ · 08-27-2011, 12:09 PM

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Originally Posted by hip hop bunny hop

It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!"

I totally would with this guy. His taste in music is amazing.

Paedantic Basterd · 08-27-2011, 12:16 PM

Maybe condense it into a few genres, with a couple of examples for each one? I doubt most people will have any idea who any of these artists are, maybe including genres would help.

08-26-2011, 01:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
Itsme Groupie Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Here Posts: 28	Would This Catch Your Attention? I made a flyer and pinned it up at the music building of a local university as well as a couple at the community college which I attend. Here is what it looks like, tell me whether it would peak your interest had you noticed it on a corkboard whilst walking to class or to practice. Violinist looking for like-minded musicians Influences include: Malipiero Shostakovich Arvo Part Gavin Bryers Clogs Ned Rorem George Crumb Schubert Bach Vivaldi The Mars Volta The Flying Luttenbachers Neurosis Ballaké Sissoko Mike Pride’s From Bacteria to Boys Aaron Goldberg The Silk Road Ensemble Sunn 0))) Boris Merzbow Opeth Joshua Abrams Terry Riley Comus Grails (Particularly their album “Black Tar Prophesies 1, 2 and 3” ) Sir Richard Bishop Stockhausen John Cage Ravi Shankar and many more that won’t fit on this flyer IF INTERESTED IN THROWING SOME IDEAS BACK AND FORTH CONCERNING MUSICAL COLLABORATION PLEASE CALL (*)-***

08-26-2011, 09:58 PM	#6 (permalink)
hip hop bunny hop Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,381	It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!" __________________ Have mercy on the poor.

08-26-2011, 03:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	Yes. Unfortunately for you, most of the kids at your college probably only know about 2 or 3 off that list. Good luck.

08-26-2011, 04:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
~~antiboredom101~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 30	^ what up freebase! Just got back! Yes, that is a good flyer. Might want to add some graphics.

08-26-2011, 07:29 PM	#5 (permalink)
Itsme Groupie Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Here Posts: 28	This would only catch one person's attention? My vision is doomed....

08-27-2011, 12:16 PM	#10 (permalink)
Paedantic Basterd Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 5,184	Maybe condense it into a few genres, with a couple of examples for each one? I doubt most people will have any idea who any of these artists are, maybe including genres would help.