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Old 02-27-2017, 03:21 PM   #11 (permalink)
Prepare 4 the Fight Scene
 
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What do you mean, gave it up?
I gave up on the horror after the door part
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I probably would have left out the epilogue, and ended with him just coming back to the office, picking up a sheet and continuing his work. But really well written. Well done.
yeah well that's why I'm the Shyamalan and you're not

but thanks

For that other one it's natural to not get the connection between scenes since I haven't yet made any connections between scenes
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Hmm, what's this in my pocket?

*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*

DAMN IT MONDO
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