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Old 05-15-2018, 05:36 PM   #701 (permalink)
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Oh holy good ****! I just realised!

Spoiler for holy ****!!!!!!!!:
Motor Girl turning up at Dan's door, at the very moment he's about to shoot himself, isn't at all coincidental, is it? That's his mother, sending her and the others to give him something to solve, something to fight for, something to live for. Like any mother, she wouldn't want her son killing himself, so she did the only thing she could, even though it resulted in her having to sacrifice herself!


Man, you are a goddamn genius!
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Old 05-15-2018, 05:57 PM   #702 (permalink)
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Oh holy good ****! I just realised!

Spoiler for holy ****!!!!!!!!:
Motor Girl turning up at Dan's door, at the very moment he's about to shoot himself, isn't at all coincidental, is it? That's his mother, sending her and the others to give him something to solve, something to fight for, something to live for. Like any mother, she wouldn't want her son killing himself, so she did the only thing she could, even though it resulted in her having to sacrifice herself!
Maaaaaybe...
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Old 05-17-2018, 01:57 AM   #703 (permalink)
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Never Got To Go by OccultHawk

A man woke up every morning and told himself today was not his day to die. He ended up living forever.
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Old 05-20-2018, 10:30 AM   #704 (permalink)
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Ori, would you be interested in returning the favour? I'm kind of done posting stuff here (nearly) as it either gets ignored or Hawk pounces on it and rips out its throat before it even has time to scream for help, but as a fellow writer (shut up, Hawk!) I value your opinion highly, and I'd love to get your feedback on my stories. Maybe you're too busy, but if you have the time I can send you some of the ones I've written so far.

I guess anyone else who's interested can have them too, but I doubt that figure will rise above zero.
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Old 05-20-2018, 09:01 PM   #705 (permalink)
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Ori, would you be interested in returning the favour? I'm kind of done posting stuff here (nearly) as it either gets ignored or Hawk pounces on it and rips out its throat before it even has time to scream for help, but as a fellow writer (shut up, Hawk!) I value your opinion highly, and I'd love to get your feedback on my stories. Maybe you're too busy, but if you have the time I can send you some of the ones I've written so far.

I guess anyone else who's interested can have them too, but I doubt that figure will rise above zero.
Sorry, I thought I responded to this earlier. I could swear I hit "submit reply" and everything. Weird.

Anyway, yeah, totally! I'm kinda busy with work, but if you've got some short stories you want feedback on, then send them my way.
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Old 05-22-2018, 01:56 PM   #706 (permalink)
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Sorry, I thought I responded to this earlier. I could swear I hit "submit reply" and everything. Weird.

Anyway, yeah, totally! I'm kinda busy with work, but if you've got some short stories you want feedback on, then send them my way.
Thanks man. Appreciate it. I'll have to take some time to tidy some of them up, finish others, but I'll be in touch. #WritersUnite
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Old 05-29-2018, 03:20 AM   #707 (permalink)
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Old 07-23-2018, 12:21 PM   #708 (permalink)
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Never Got To Go by OccultHawk

A man woke up every morning and told himself today was not his day to die. He ended up living forever.
Always Got To Go by Orificus

A man was kidnapped and chained in a basement, where he was raped every day for years. The one thing that kept him going until his rescue was the assurance that life couldn't possibly get any worse for him.

After his release, he tried to make ends meet as a postal worker. A few months later, he paid someone to put him back in the basement.
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Old 07-23-2018, 07:48 PM   #709 (permalink)
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Occult Cock by G. L. Ori Hole

There once was a man who lived life on the edge. YOLO was his policy. Then he got his dick caught in a lawn mower in a misadventure, and it became YODO.

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Old 08-25-2018, 11:03 AM   #710 (permalink)
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Woke up at like 3:00 A.M. and wrote a 6,000 word short story about a revolution that was started by someone farting.
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