What are you Writing now?

Trollheart · 05-09-2018, 05:04 PM

The Doll/Their Little Guardian

OH **** ME YES! Now we are back on track! ****ing excellent in every way. Love the switching between the first-person narrative and the family/child's view, the story slowly building up within the main story, the big twists and surprises, the characters, the settings, and THE ****ING ENDING!

Absolutely ****ing top class man! 10/10. I'd give it higher if I could.
**** it! 20/10!!

Oriphiel · 05-09-2018, 05:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Trollheart

The Doll/Their Little Guardian

OH **** ME YES! Now we are back on track! ****ing excellent in every way. Love the switching between the first-person narrative and the family/child's view, the story slowly building up within the main story, the big twists and surprises, the characters, the settings, and THE ****ING ENDING!

Absolutely ****ing top class man! 10/10. I'd give it higher if I could.
**** it! 20/10!!

Oh shit, thanks! 20/10 is high praise.

Fun fact: I based it off of a real Japanese doll that my dad bought when I was a kid, complete with the head that would randomly fall off. Used to scare the shit out of me. I actually still have it. Took it with me when I moved out, and never had the heart to get rid of it.

Trollheart · 05-09-2018, 05:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Oriphiel

Oh shit, thanks! 20/10 is high praise.

Fun fact: I based it off of a real Japanese doll that my dad bought when I was a kid, complete with the head that would randomly fall off. Used to scare the shit out of me. I actually still have it. Took it with me when I moved out, and never had the heart to get rid of it.

Why the hell didn't you submit that one? Any editor would snap that up! Looking forward to reading the next one now.

DwnWthVwls · 05-11-2018, 05:00 PM

Ori, write me a short story about a group of post-apoc survivors who outcast their best survivalist for being socially awkward and then get hunted and eaten by her.

Oriphiel · 05-12-2018, 05:11 AM

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Originally Posted by DwnWthVwls

Ori, write me a short story about a group of post-apoc survivors who outcast their best survivalist for being socially awkward and then get hunted and eaten by her.

Is this a legit request? 'Cause I don't mean to sound like OH, but no group of survivors in a post apocalyptic scenario would ever intentionally decrease the amount of non irradiated vaginas in their immediate vicinity.

Trollheart · 05-12-2018, 10:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Oriphiel

Is this a legit request? 'Cause I don't mean to sound like OH, but no group of survivors in a post apocalyptic scenario would ever intentionally decrease the amount of non irradiated vaginas in their immediate vicinity.

They would if she was Hilary.

DwnWthVwls · 05-11-2018, 05:26 PM

There once was a man named Jack,
he tickled the Batlords crack.
When he came up for air,
after accepting his dare,
he died.

The end.

Trollheart · 05-11-2018, 05:29 PM

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Originally Posted by DwnWthVwls

There once was a man named Jack,
he tickled the Batlords crack.
When he came up for air,
after accepting his dare,
he died.

The end.

Nah man, you want the Rhyming Thread. Over that way, turn left after the burned-out cars. Can't miss it.

DwnWthVwls · 05-11-2018, 05:30 PM

Poems don't count as writing? I'd call you a pretentious fuck, but I think a simple, "whatever Frownland" is way more insulting.

Trollheart · 05-11-2018, 05:40 PM

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Originally Posted by DwnWthVwls

Poems don't count as writing? I'd call you a pretentious fuck, but I think a simple, "whatever Frownland" is way more insulting.

Not sure poems can count.
Touchy much? It was just a joke, Mister I Hate Vowels. AND AND AND! If you hate vowels so much, how come you use them eh? Practicing what you preach, huh? Sounds a bit dodgy to me...

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Trollheart Born to be mild Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 26,996	*The Doll/Their Little Guardian* OH ** ME YES! Now we are back on track! ing excellent in every way. Love the switching between the first-person narrative and the family/child's view, the story slowly building up within the main story, the big twists and surprises, the characters, the settings, and THE ING ENDING! Absolutely ing top class man! 10/10. I'd give it higher if I could. ** it! 20/10!! __________________ Trollheart: Signature-free since April 2018