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Old 01-25-2018, 06:19 PM   #511 (permalink)
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Its great; if the imagery were a sandwich I would definitely eat it.
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Old 01-29-2018, 03:57 AM   #512 (permalink)
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There once was a lady who always wore clean underwear in case she had to go to the emergency room. Then, one day, she had an accident. And then she had another accident. The entire emergency team at the ER laughed and laughed. Years later, they still joke about it.
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Old 01-29-2018, 03:58 AM   #513 (permalink)
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there once was a lady who always wore clean underwear in case she had to go to the emergency room. Then, one day, she had an accident. And then she had another accident. The entire emergency team at the er laughed and laughed. Years later, they still joke about it.
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Old 01-29-2018, 04:01 AM   #514 (permalink)
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Where can I ignore the existence of this perfume?
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Old 01-29-2018, 04:05 AM   #515 (permalink)
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Where can I ignore the existence of this perfume?
Good one

Ori- what’s IGN?
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Old 01-29-2018, 04:30 AM   #516 (permalink)
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Good one

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Here, let me demonstrate.

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Unfortunately, in spite of all of the new features and creative mechanics, at its core the series is still part of the hack and slash genre, which we consider to be faux pas. Plus, OccultHawkTec isn't paying us the big bucks to feature gigantic video ads on our website. So, they can get fucked.

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Old 01-29-2018, 04:38 AM   #517 (permalink)
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Are you being cryptic?

I wrote a good story!
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Old 01-29-2018, 04:58 AM   #518 (permalink)
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It was a bit long.
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It was a bit long.
It took place over the course of years.
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Old 01-29-2018, 05:21 AM   #520 (permalink)
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That's no excuse. One sentence, or GTFO.

She could still hear the laughter that greeted her as she woke, their faces staring down at her through the light, the soft kiss of soiled cotton around her ankles.

See? Treat your audience like a hooker. Just get in, and then get out. The ambiguity that comes from excessive brevity will make your story seem much deeper than it actually is.
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