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Old 01-24-2018, 05:22 AM   #491 (permalink)
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I've always wanted to make my own comic book.
What about?
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Old 01-24-2018, 05:30 AM   #492 (permalink)
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Some sort of antii-hero.
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Old 01-24-2018, 03:15 PM   #493 (permalink)
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Thanks man. Appreciate it, coming from you.
I like your story too: this is the second part of the one you posted earlier, yes?
I decided everything I'm writing is the same thing so yeah I guess, but not the second part. 40th part or something I dunno.
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Hmm, what's this in my pocket?

*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*

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Old 01-24-2018, 03:19 PM   #494 (permalink)
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I decided everything I'm writing is the same thing so yeah I guess, but not the second part. 40th part or something I dunno.
Ah, right. Mine are all separate. After all, it would be hard to link the story of a man dressed as a woman falling from a high building, Hitler being abducted by Nazis, a man on a very strange train, the above vampire, aliens invading Earth and a weird twist on murder in the future into one story. And they're only a few of the, currently, twenty stories I have on the go. Wish I had two more heads and a few more arms. Or at least an army of clones.
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Old 01-24-2018, 03:34 PM   #495 (permalink)
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well I'm linking a story of the love between a hallucinating insomniac and a clairvoyant supposed demon girl as claimed by a witch doctor in some hidden wood, the hypnagogic exploits of a bartender and his customer whose dialogue act as a call and response of the dream limbo'd mind, a mysterious and perpetually expanding lunar commune of troubled architects coming to terms with the nonsense they're involved in, an even more mysterious building outside the compound that coincides with a similar building (a building that is a central theme in most of my writing) in the center of a vast wasteland called the Expanse where astral souls travel through the Earth ethereally, horrid murders that end in monstrous demons growing from the corpses to further rampage, and whatever else stuff like that.
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*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*

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Old 01-24-2018, 03:46 PM   #496 (permalink)
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Looks like we're both going to be pretty damn busy for 2018, huh?
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Old 01-24-2018, 04:41 PM   #497 (permalink)
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Old 01-24-2018, 05:49 PM   #498 (permalink)
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Will get back to you, I promise.
Gonna go read it now.
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Old 01-24-2018, 06:04 PM   #499 (permalink)
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Not bad, not bad at all. Leaves questions unanswered, but then, so do some of mine. Well written, very descriptive; I see what you mean about the King influence. I could ask a lot of questions, make criticisms but as you pointed out, you were much younger when you wrote this, and were you to rewrite it now I'm sure you'd tighten it up. As it stands though, pretty darn good job.
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Old 01-24-2018, 06:06 PM   #500 (permalink)
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how come I don't get more feedback bitch
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