The Story... (dancing, house, punk, rap, rock)

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 07:16 AM

I tried this on another forum and it was brilliant. All you do is take it in turns to write part of a story. Whatever you write can be as long or as short as you like, and about whatever you like. I'll start...

One day Hobojesus was walking along Detroit. He stopped just outside of 8 Mile, and was called in by some mysterious man with a long, blonde beard-like a wizards.
"Halt!" Said the man.
"If you want to pass through here then you must take me on in a rap battle!"
Hobojesus looked suprised.
"Okay." He said reluctantly.
The bearded man threw off his coat and began to battle. After he had finished, he picked up his coat and put it back on.
"Your turn." He said, pointing to hobojesus.
Hobojesus started to rhyme, but was heckled by some passers by.
"Hey Fenix! What are you doing battling with losers like this?" The passer by said.
The bearded man, named Fenix, stood next to hobojesus.
"Are these guys giving you hassle?" He said. Hobo nodded. Then, suddenly, Fenix' arms transformed into 2 ak47's, and blasted the passers by away.
"Woah, how did you do that?" Hobo asked, astounded.
"I will teach you, if you come with me..." Fenix said.

Now someone else carry the story along.

either/or · 01-15-2006, 07:20 AM

so Hobo decides to go with Fenix. Fenix leads him to his magical seers tower, which takes 24 minutes to reach the top of. Once up there, Fenix leads hobo down a corridor and into a mini side chamber in which there are many...

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 07:23 AM

Cup of soups. This is the Tower of Fal, after all. So, Fenix talks to Fal who agrees to teach Hobo the ways of the 'flying Ninja'. Fal says that Hobo must travel to the bottom of Lake Crystal, where he will meet a dark Ninja master by the name of...

either/or · 01-15-2006, 07:24 AM

eitheror! so off hobo sets to travel to lake crystal. he takes his trusty walking cane and walking robe and walking boots and sets off. but on the way he encounters a.........

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 08:38 AM

Giant ogre, about 6 feet tall. The ogre looks Hobo in the face, grunting loudly.
"Who are you?" It growls.
"I'm Hobojesus." Hobo says, not scared in the slightest. They had a creature like this where he used to live. The neighbours called him Alexisonfire.
"Well Hobojesus." The ogre grinned. "what are you doing here?" Hobo pointed behind the ogre. "I want to make my way to the bottom of here, to meet with the Dark Master Ninja either/or. He will teach me the ways of the ninja, so that I can be like FenixPunk."
The ogre nods.
"I know either/or." He said. "He is my master."
Hobo looked suprised.
"Really? Can you take me to him?" Hobo asked.
"Of course..." Said the Ogre. "But first I need you to help me out."
Hobo sighed.
"With what?" He asked.
"Well, My house is just across this stream. And I have been having a problem with an infestation of rats."
"And what do you want me to do about it?" Hobo asked impatiently.
"I was wondering whether you could ask FenixPunk to use his Ninja powers to kill them all. Either/or won't do it because he is too busy, and I am to frightened of the furry fellas."
Hobo sighed, continuing back up to the Tower of Fal to get Fenix. He found Fenix eating some of the endless cup of soups, brought him back down to the Ogre's house and told him what was wrong. Fenix turned his hands into ak47s once more and killed all the pesky critters.
"Thankyou so much!" Said the ogre. "Now I will show you to either/or!"
The ogre lead them both to Lake Crystal, where a small, orange man was drinking some of the water.
"this is either/or?" Hobo asked.
"NO!" Bellowed the Ogre. "That is not either/or, that is...

Imonlydancing · 01-15-2006, 09:24 AM

'YO MAMA' Screamed a voice from the mountain next to lake cystal.
Just then, Imonlydancing, Ladyluckrules & AITA pull up in an sceneXcore army tank & do a drive by.
'POW POW! GAT GAT!' they shout as hobojesus gets shot in the head.
'YO, BIATCH, GET OFFA MY LAKE' Shouted AITA in a very sinister, yet strangely gangster tone.
Ladyluck was quick to turn the army tank around and start driving straight into hobojesus, either/or and the others path...
Just then, with a stroke of luck, that you only see in films...

(HAHAHAHA This is weird.P.S I'm sure we have one of these threads somewhere, maybe more than one...carry on)

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 11:43 AM

Fenix's arms turned into rocket launchers! He blew up the tanks, and LadyLuckRules and AITA were instantly killed.
"NO! I LOVED THEM!" Shouted Imonlydancing.
"But I loved Hobo!" Fenix yelled back.
"Let's settle this!" Imonlydancing said, turning her arms into swords. Fenix did so to.
"Stop hurting each other! You're making me upset!" The ogre said.
Fenix and IOD clashed in the middle of the Lake. They battled and battled until Fenix chopped off IOD's head. Her head rolled into the Lake, blood staining the floor.
"We must take Hobo's body to either/or. He knows how to regain life in the dead!" Fenix said to the Ogre. The ogre fell over and died, probably from cancer or something.
"Oh no!" Fenix said. "What will I do now without my guide?"
As he said that, he heard a voice in the distance...
"I'll help you!" The voice said...

01-15-2006, 07:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	The Story... I tried this on another forum and it was brilliant. All you do is take it in turns to write part of a story. Whatever you write can be as long or as short as you like, and about whatever you like. I'll start... One day Hobojesus was walking along Detroit. He stopped just outside of 8 Mile, and was called in by some mysterious man with a long, blonde beard-like a wizards. "Halt!" Said the man. "If you want to pass through here then you must take me on in a rap battle!" Hobojesus looked suprised. "Okay." He said reluctantly. The bearded man threw off his coat and began to battle. After he had finished, he picked up his coat and put it back on. "Your turn." He said, pointing to hobojesus. Hobojesus started to rhyme, but was heckled by some passers by. "Hey Fenix! What are you doing battling with losers like this?" The passer by said. The bearded man, named Fenix, stood next to hobojesus. "Are these guys giving you hassle?" He said. Hobo nodded. Then, suddenly, Fenix' arms transformed into 2 ak47's, and blasted the passers by away. "Woah, how did you do that?" Hobo asked, astounded. "I will teach you, if you come with me..." Fenix said. Now someone else carry the story along.

01-15-2006, 07:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	so Hobo decides to go with Fenix. Fenix leads him to his magical seers tower, which takes 24 minutes to reach the top of. Once up there, Fenix leads hobo down a corridor and into a mini side chamber in which there are many... __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

01-15-2006, 07:24 AM	#4 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	eitheror! so off hobo sets to travel to lake crystal. he takes his trusty walking cane and walking robe and walking boots and sets off. but on the way he encounters a......... __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

01-15-2006, 07:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Cup of soups. This is the Tower of Fal, after all. So, Fenix talks to Fal who agrees to teach Hobo the ways of the 'flying Ninja'. Fal says that Hobo must travel to the bottom of Lake Crystal, where he will meet a dark Ninja master by the name of...

01-15-2006, 08:38 AM	#5 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Giant ogre, about 6 feet tall. The ogre looks Hobo in the face, grunting loudly. "Who are you?" It growls. "I'm Hobojesus." Hobo says, not scared in the slightest. They had a creature like this where he used to live. The neighbours called him Alexisonfire. "Well Hobojesus." The ogre grinned. "what are you doing here?" Hobo pointed behind the ogre. "I want to make my way to the bottom of here, to meet with the Dark Master Ninja either/or. He will teach me the ways of the ninja, so that I can be like FenixPunk." The ogre nods. "I know either/or." He said. "He is my master." Hobo looked suprised. "Really? Can you take me to him?" Hobo asked. "Of course..." Said the Ogre. "But first I need you to help me out." Hobo sighed. "With what?" He asked. "Well, My house is just across this stream. And I have been having a problem with an infestation of rats." "And what do you want me to do about it?" Hobo asked impatiently. "I was wondering whether you could ask FenixPunk to use his Ninja powers to kill them all. Either/or won't do it because he is too busy, and I am to frightened of the furry fellas." Hobo sighed, continuing back up to the Tower of Fal to get Fenix. He found Fenix eating some of the endless cup of soups, brought him back down to the Ogre's house and told him what was wrong. Fenix turned his hands into ak47s once more and killed all the pesky critters. "Thankyou so much!" Said the ogre. "Now I will show you to either/or!" The ogre lead them both to Lake Crystal, where a small, orange man was drinking some of the water. "this is either/or?" Hobo asked. "NO!" Bellowed the Ogre. "That is not either/or, that is...

01-15-2006, 09:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
Imonlydancing raaaaaaa Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bedford Posts: 951	'YO MAMA' Screamed a voice from the mountain next to lake cystal. Just then, Imonlydancing, Ladyluckrules & AITA pull up in an sceneXcore army tank & do a drive by. 'POW POW! GAT GAT!' they shout as hobojesus gets shot in the head. 'YO, BIATCH, GET OFFA MY LAKE' Shouted AITA in a very sinister, yet strangely gangster tone. Ladyluck was quick to turn the army tank around and start driving straight into hobojesus, either/or and the others path... Just then, with a stroke of luck, that you only see in films... (HAHAHAHA This is weird.P.S I'm sure we have one of these threads somewhere, maybe more than one...carry on)

01-15-2006, 11:43 AM	#7 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Fenix's arms turned into rocket launchers! He blew up the tanks, and LadyLuckRules and AITA were instantly killed. "NO! I LOVED THEM!" Shouted Imonlydancing. "But I loved Hobo!" Fenix yelled back. "Let's settle this!" Imonlydancing said, turning her arms into swords. Fenix did so to. "Stop hurting each other! You're making me upset!" The ogre said. Fenix and IOD clashed in the middle of the Lake. They battled and battled until Fenix chopped off IOD's head. Her head rolled into the Lake, blood staining the floor. "We must take Hobo's body to either/or. He knows how to regain life in the dead!" Fenix said to the Ogre. The ogre fell over and died, probably from cancer or something. "Oh no!" Fenix said. "What will I do now without my guide?" As he said that, he heard a voice in the distance... "I'll help you!" The voice said...