Hey

RikGrimesIsDead · 11-22-2016, 10:18 AM

Hi beautiful people on my screen,
My name is David Smith and im from the ever so sunny UK

Im here to get some feedback from other songwriters/musicians on my lyrics and how i can introduce the beat,melody,timing (etc)
I hope you enjoy my life in words i guess......

Chula Vista · 11-22-2016, 11:55 AM

Welcome aboard. Who's your favorite artists?

~~ChelseaDagger~~ · 11-22-2016, 08:33 PM

I'm not a songwriter/musician, but I'm pretty damn adept at the art of criticism, if I do say so myself.

Welcome aboard, David Smith (IF that's your real name!)

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RikGrimesIsDead Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Liverpool Posts: 14	Hey Hi beautiful people on my screen, My name is David Smith and im from the ever so sunny UK Im here to get some feedback from other songwriters/musicians on my lyrics and how i can introduce the beat,melody,timing (etc) I hope you enjoy my life in words i guess......

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Chula Vista Toasted Poster Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: SoCal by way of Boston Posts: 11,332	Welcome aboard. Who's your favorite artists? __________________ “The fact that we live at the bottom of a deep gravity well, on the surface of a gas covered planet going around a nuclear fireball 90 million miles away and think this to be normal is obviously some indication of how skewed our perspective tends to be.”

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~~ChelseaDagger~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: In the fires of your own disillusion Posts: 684	I'm not a songwriter/musician, but I'm pretty damn adept at the art of criticism, if I do say so myself. Welcome aboard, David Smith (IF that's your real name!)