i think its pretty good, i like the the way it tells a story. 6 id say. got a bit confused at first when u kept saying "fined", take it you mean find?! and the "hello hello" for some totally strange reason reminded of the lional richie cheese monstrosity we call "Hello?"- but that isnt your fault, just my stupid thought process. so overall, nice lyrics.

it wasnt too bad. but id be careful posting my lyrics on the net. its thick as thieves out there.

definently way too similar to pink flloyd - comfortably numb