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07-04-2004, 01:12 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
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Tell me what you guys think of this...
i was aiming for an earth+ sky comparison and stuff for this song, its prolly the best taht i've done as far as the sky.
Letter from The Moon After relationships I am suddenly in an eclipse in between the earth and the sun i am the moon its not fun cross the sky like shooting star to be in the middle and have 2 sides burnin at your skin and feeling so little blame me for pulling darkness across the earth until daylight will come again when the moon is defeated and then my skin is feelin pressure theres no water, in my heart each impact makes a crater and im leavin you, in the dark! blame me for shutting out your eyes and now you can find love you know its just our lives only on earth our looks lead to success do you think I like being gray maybe someday ill make a statement for the moon love will in the dark and stay that way just cuz you have eyes and the earth is, colorful and round doesnt mean you can judge by looks, thats not your heart just remember what i told you use love in the dark woahhhh, im feelin lonely and the sky is fallin on me and the heat from the sun is burnin me up and i'll continue to be flamed with my luck. |
07-05-2004, 11:19 PM | #4 (permalink) |
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bump #3, cmon guys, i havnt had one comment on this, in the mean time imma post this song i just wrote lol
The Movement of Love The birds fly around each one reminds me of you floating delecately thats the way you move close to me able to warm my heart softly kiss my thoughts everything i know is forgot when you're in my arms i feel complete when you're around me I never have to compete I am everything I'm born to be I'm not afraid again I'm the same with you never changed, same Evan You said hold my in your arms I grabbed your hand took you out in the rain my heart pounding like a rubber band I told you nothing makes me feel this way no action, no words will fill me up like you do and no one can do this I know when we kissed my heart grew You said you loved me and I said the same there was only the truth in your words there was no ****ing game Love was simple, and amazing your eyes touch my heart and your smile warms my head i melt inside, loneliness is fed Now I am done I'll never have to love again I would hold you all night until the rain dries from the light and everything is beautiful again your eyes described through words my heart described by a vibration I love the flowers, the light and the birds and I'll accept in my life that I am happy again. |
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