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Old 07-03-2004, 09:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default What do you think of this song?

This song i wrote means so much to me, its one of my personal favorites taht i've written over the past 5 years or so ive been writing. Keep in mind that i just turned 16.

Thank you, please be honest. The name of the song is "Lost Confession".

In a lost world where I need some one else,
after a long period of denial
I want to tell you just how I felt
and I want to hold you in my arms for a while

I want your eyes to give the most hope in my life
I want you to love me and hold me close at night
I want to look at the stars and find less beauty
than the face that you make, i know what it will do to me

I'll have the smile that will cover a million miles
and I'll cry after a phase of a relaxed gaze
into the stare that broadens my horizons,
thats why I see you when I look into the sky and I,
will let you know just how I feel
and what I did to deal
was the closest thing to perfect ive ever done
I was then complete

most would spill blood,
as did I
but this blood was ink,
and I would not die.

my pen would caress the page
like your touch when were engaged
in talks of love
and the worlds below and above

and at last i will tell you what you mean to me
everything i'll probably never be
everything i seem to want from you
lies in your eyes in the form of truth.
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