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[Frownland]

Originally Posted by Lucem Ferre

Review my ****ty music.

https://soundcloud.com/lucem-ferre17...-sick-is-in-me

Absolutely not like what I heard before. The hook is great at points but goes a little heavy on the autotune, it could have used a little subtlety. Try out that glissando/legato a bit. Your verses are ass though. I will say that you have a kind of inflection to your rapping combined with the effects-riddled element of it that reminds me of Shabazz Palaces in a way. You might just be accidentally avant-garde genius my man. I'll give it a 5/10.

https://soundcloud.com/lucem-ferre17/nightmares

I like the twangy instrument but damn bro. ****ing cringe. The dollar store beats could work in some cases but who told you that was a good idea? You don't have to have a hook, you know. Better verses on this one though, flow is smoother and not annoying, certainly the saving grace of the track. I'll give it a 4/10.

[Lucem Ferre]

Originally Posted by Frownland

Absolutely not like what I heard before. The hook is great at points but goes a little heavy on the autotune, it could have used a little subtlety. Try out that glissando/legato a bit. Your verses are ass though. I will say that you have a kind of inflection to your rapping combined with the effects-riddled element of it that reminds me of Shabazz Palaces in a way. You might just be accidentally avant-garde genius my man. I'll give it a 5/10.



I like the twangy instrument but damn bro. ****ing cringe. The dollar store beats could work in some cases but who told you that was a good idea? You don't have to have a hook, you know. Better verses on this one though, flow is smoother and not annoying, certainly the saving grace of the track. I'll give it a 4/10.

I'm rapping over other people's beats it's for that project. First one is Crawl by Gambino and the dollar store beat was Travi$ Scott's Goosebumps.