The Great Biweekly Artists of Musicbanter Song Off Act II

DeadChannel · 04-08-2015, 11:17 AM

Next three days are off for me because baseball practice is about to get started.
Hopefully I can get the bare bones backing guitar done on saturday.

Machine · 04-09-2015, 12:56 PM

Okay I'm finally, I put the lyrics up because there's a lot of distortion on purpose from my acoustic guitar recording onto my phone.

https://machineplus.bandcamp.com/tra...l-is-the-water

grtwhtgrvty · 04-09-2015, 03:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Machine

Okay I'm finally, I put the lyrics up because there's a lot of distortion on purpose from my acoustic guitar recording onto my phone.

https://machineplus.bandcamp.com/tra...l-is-the-water

This is my fave so far.

Machine · 04-09-2015, 03:50 PM

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Originally Posted by grtwhtgrvty

This is my fave so far.

Ha thanks, been working on this all week to sound right.

Plankton · 04-09-2015, 03:54 PM

My submission for the water theme.

SoundClick artist: PRD Solo Project - page with MP3 music downloads

Plankton · 04-13-2015, 08:04 AM

So, what happened here?

**Frownland** · 04-13-2015, 08:45 AM

Y'all mother****ers have until Wednesday to submit your tracks before we commence the voting.

Trollheart · 04-13-2015, 02:11 PM

OK, some more opinions by someone who couldn't write a song unless he had an inbuilt synth track and the chord of C to play with

Machine: love this, very depressing and downbeat but played and sung really well. Feedback ruins it though: had to turn treble to full and bass to zero to get any of it. Also, what's the chorus, as it's not in the lyric?

Overcast: Really liked that. Very spooky/horror/suspense movie vibe, Goes kind of Vangelis near the end. Really cool.

Grtwhtgrvty: Sorry but this sort of thing --- sampling, soundscapes, textures, what have you --- is not my thing. I'm sure it's well done and very clever (you certainly seem to have fans from the comments) but not for me.

YorkeDaddy: Love this too. Very relaxing and sad in a way. You can certainly play a piano. Another favourite.

Plankton: Why bother? Everything this guy touches turns to gold, and this is no exception. A real contender for winner.

Think that's it, of the ones I've listened to. If I've missed anyone out let me know.

Powerstars · 04-13-2015, 02:15 PM

Might be up for the next round of this.

Machine · 04-13-2015, 04:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Trollheart

OK, some more opinions by someone who couldn't write a song unless he had an inbuilt synth track and the chord of C to play with

Machine: love this, very depressing and downbeat but played and sung really well. Feedback ruins it though: had to turn treble to full and bass to zero to get any of it. Also, what's the chorus, as it's not in the lyric?

I know a lot of people probably won't like the feedback but it was intentional. And the chorus lyric is nothing just kind if a washed over hum supposed to work as like a wave in the sea or something. (that sounded really pretentious)

04-09-2015, 12:56 PM	#142 (permalink)
Machine moon lake inc. Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: Detroit Posts: 2,125	Okay I'm finally, I put the lyrics up because there's a lot of distortion on purpose from my acoustic guitar recording onto my phone. https://machineplus.bandcamp.com/tra...l-is-the-water __________________ boost my ego listen to me stroke my delay pedal ever wanted to hear death grips songs... but they're acoustic? me neither.

04-09-2015, 03:54 PM	#145 (permalink)
Plankton Just Keep Swimming... Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: See signature... Posts: 7,765	My submission for the water theme. SoundClick artist: PRD Solo Project - page with MP3 music downloads __________________ See location...

04-13-2015, 08:04 AM	#146 (permalink)
Plankton Just Keep Swimming... Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: See signature... Posts: 7,765	So, what happened here? __________________ See location...

04-13-2015, 08:45 AM	#147 (permalink)
Frownland SOPHIE FOREVER Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: East of the Southern North American West Posts: 35,541	Y'all mother***ers have until Wednesday to submit your tracks before we commence the voting. __________________ Studies show that when a given norm is changed in the face of the unchanging, the remaining contradictions will parallel the truth.* d e a f b o x

04-13-2015, 02:11 PM	#148 (permalink)
Trollheart Born to be mild Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 26,992	OK, some more opinions by someone who couldn't write a song unless he had an inbuilt synth track and the chord of C to play with Machine: love this, very depressing and downbeat but played and sung really well. Feedback ruins it though: had to turn treble to full and bass to zero to get any of it. Also, what's the chorus, as it's not in the lyric? Overcast: Really liked that. Very spooky/horror/suspense movie vibe, Goes kind of Vangelis near the end. Really cool. Grtwhtgrvty: Sorry but this sort of thing --- sampling, soundscapes, textures, what have you --- is not my thing. I'm sure it's well done and very clever (you certainly seem to have fans from the comments) but not for me. YorkeDaddy: Love this too. Very relaxing and sad in a way. You can certainly play a piano. Another favourite. Plankton: Why bother? Everything this guy touches turns to gold, and this is no exception. A real contender for winner. Think that's it, of the ones I've listened to. If I've missed anyone out let me know. __________________ Trollheart: Signature-free since April 2018

04-08-2015, 11:17 AM	#141 (permalink)
DeadChannel Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2014 Location: Canada Posts: 1,259	Next three days are off for me because baseball practice is about to get started. Hopefully I can get the bare bones backing guitar done on saturday.

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Powerstars Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 450	Might be up for the next round of this. __________________ Last.Fm My New Journal Favorite Album Of The Moment: They Might Be Giants - Glean