I am President - Draw the Line

Colli · 07-13-2009, 02:44 AM

Hey guys

I dont know if this is the right place for this thread but i am looking for constructive critisism on a song my band has recorded.

Theres lots of things i want to change even after listening to it once.

Its a quick rock song - ive shortened it so you dont have to spend more then 2 mins of your time

all the best - great site!!

LINK BELOW

Colli · 07-18-2009, 02:54 AM

everyone is a bit shy..

crash_override · 07-18-2009, 03:03 AM

Well, first of all YOU ARE SPAM SCUM OF THE EARTH AND DESERVE TO DIE!!!!!

Second of all, I was initially pissed that you interrupted my listening of the Screaming Tress, but then I discovered that your song sounds alot like Screaming Trees and I wasn't as mad.

Lastly, you mispelled Led Zeppelin on your Myspace page, which is pretty embarrassing.

Colli · 07-18-2009, 03:09 PM

Ok then mr spelling and spam police! Glad you didnt mind the song too much and the spelling has been corrected...everyone happy!!

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 07-18-2009, 03:26 PM

Love the vocal effects! The drums sounded a bit poorly recorded but overall great job.

EDIT: And by the way, you should stick around.

jackhammer · 07-18-2009, 05:11 PM

Spam die blah blah blah.

mr dave · 07-18-2009, 05:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli

Ok then mr spelling and spam police!

if you think C_O is harsh don't ever try this on the other site hahahahaha

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 07-18-2009, 05:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jackhammer

Spam die blah blah blah.

Enjoying the fact that you don't have to deal with it, or missing it?

jackhammer · 07-18-2009, 05:31 PM

Just a friendly alert for those in bold although standards are slipping already

right-track · 07-18-2009, 05:47 PM

It's potential/borderline spam. No race to 15 posts for a link. Plenty here have myspace links. If he doesn't stick around and contribute, he's gone.

07-13-2009, 02:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
Colli Groupie Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 18	I am President - Draw the Line Hey guys I dont know if this is the right place for this thread but i am looking for constructive critisism on a song my band has recorded. Theres lots of things i want to change even after listening to it once. Its a quick rock song - ive shortened it so you dont have to spend more then 2 mins of your time all the best - great site!! LINK BELOW __________________ www.myspace.com/iampresidentspace

07-18-2009, 02:54 AM	#2 (permalink)
Colli Groupie Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 18	everyone is a bit shy.. __________________ www.myspace.com/iampresidentspace

07-18-2009, 03:09 PM	#4 (permalink)
Colli Groupie Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 18	Ok then mr spelling and spam police! Glad you didnt mind the song too much and the spelling has been corrected...everyone happy!! __________________ www.myspace.com/iampresidentspace

07-18-2009, 05:11 PM	#6 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	Spam die blah blah blah. __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

07-18-2009, 05:31 PM	#9 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	Just a friendly alert for those in bold although standards are slipping already __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

07-18-2009, 03:26 PM	#5 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	Love the vocal effects! The drums sounded a bit poorly recorded but overall great job. EDIT: And by the way, you should stick around.

07-18-2009, 05:47 PM	#10 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	It's potential/borderline spam. No race to 15 posts for a link. Plenty here have myspace links. If he doesn't stick around and contribute, he's gone.