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12-07-2004, 10:10 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Horsens , Denmark
Posts: 2
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Searching For Singer / Band
Hello Every1
i am an unknown songwriter from Denmark. Actually . i mostly write poems and later on ads a chorus on . i am making this post in hope for a Singer or a Band to step up and try to make something out of my songs . ive added one of my poems ... feel free to comment it... Hopefully someone will see this as an opportunity to try something new... Kind Regards Alec Christensen Darkness Theese voices that live inside my head has started a war within them selfves stuck in the middle i roam the night here comes the story of my miserable life A tear that is shed, falls down my face as a symbol of my past , with evolving grace this tear to me , is a hope gone lost a hope i craved for , craved for all costs. In this empty shell that is left you see a man drained from his lifecraft you see the sorrow that flows in his eyes like a river deep , a river of lies. Another one is : In This World 3 days has gone and they have made me older ... 3 days has passed since you left my world 1 million tears has made me colder the road infront of me is long and curled i dont know how to carry on living when destiny has left me with only a memory fading Lonely do i roam around listening to the fallen mans song nowhere in this world do i feel i belong i feel so left alone 3 days since i held you tight 3 days since we said our goodbye these sorrowfull feelings i have to fight i cant keep living my life this way in this world i stand alone fighting the feelings of love on my own Lonely do i roam around listening to the fallen mans song nowhere in this world do i feel i belong i feel so left alone Lonesome in the dark Fearfull in this world lonely and forgotten i roam the lonely nights Hope someone can see an idea .. i have written over 400 .. so theres alot to work with .. i have also won some competitions for poets in USA. |
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12-07-2004, 05:35 PM
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Unpatriot Act
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: planet of the rapes
Posts: 389
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^ i like the second song here. man i cant write this kinda stuff worth sh*t.
first song is kinda...i dunno....corny almost? it seems really typical, if thats the right word. like "voices inside my head" that seems kinda uninspired. comparing tears to rivers flowing, thats also kind of a metaphor that's been beating to death. 2nd verse of the first song is good though.
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12-07-2004, 06:47 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Horsens , Denmark
Posts: 2
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Yeah .. i know its a bit .. erhm . like the rest
 heres a few more ... hopefully i can get some response . both good and bad  F u c k It **** this life and all that it brings. **** all the anger, the hate and the sins. **** what there is and what is to become. **** this life , it has failed me too long. **** the meaning and the essence of life. **** all the promises , the hurt and the lies. **** what i did and ever did say. **** all the choices , ive chosen my way. **** all the tears that have been in my past **** all the sorrows that came to last **** all the friends that wasnt there This is my statement, no more do i care. put the title word in .... its censored ... and i see no need to get into a debatte with the moderators for writing it all the way down . And Scarred Im just a man with scars on his body and heart, A boy with no idea of where even to start... Im a person who always had something to prove... A man who felt there was no place to move... Im an individual fighting my demons each day, Ones i couldnt conquer so they remain to stay... An pain so burning and consuming inside... It tears up my soul with nowhere to hide... Im searching for peace i can't seem to attain, I struggle and fight but never can gain... The doors in my life slammed in my face... Im a man with such pain i long to erase... Now im a man who tries to be gentle and true An individual that doesnt always feel blue... A boy whose been hurt, but now a man who tries to love... I try to realize my strengths and rise above... For every hurt i have carried this far... i need your help to erase just even one scar... You are worth the chance of letting try... But I need you to help me, you dont need to ask why... |
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12-15-2004, 08:51 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: In my room
Posts: 405
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Man those songs r awesome, i could sumone with ur skill for my band, its called constantly under threat but at the moment we arent getting very far. the words u speak r so beautiful, thats amazing dude, great work. give me a holler sumtime
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12-25-2004, 08:37 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Posts: 12
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