Y0 I made a new song (ambient, indie, myspace, talent)

sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 06:16 PM

Give me your thoughts.

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jackhammer · 02-09-2008, 06:37 PM

I wish I had this much talent at your age. Keep it up. I'm glad you are branching out musically and making music that you want to hear, not what you think other people should hear.

sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 06:54 PM

I'm going to fix this and add a layer of several kind of sounding like they're being played far away distorted guitars and I'm also going to re-do the drums so for now tell me how you feel about the piano..

right-track · 02-09-2008, 06:56 PM

Piano's fine, but lose the drums completely.

ProggyMan · 02-09-2008, 07:16 PM

I second r-t.

sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 08:25 PM

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Edited the original link, here's the finished version.

sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 10:44 PM

MySpace.com - Ethan Smith - BELLINGHAM, Washington - Experimental / Ambient / Indie - www.myspace.com/musicethansmith

Its on myspace now.
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ProggyMan · 02-09-2008, 10:48 PM

Seems sort of...Bland. Great piano piece, but it needs more.

sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 10:51 PM

I only have access to piano/drums/guitar/bass. I think some strings would be nice but I can't afford a violin. I can't think of much else to add without it sounding out of place.

ProggyMan · 02-09-2008, 10:54 PM

Ah. I'd say try using two quiet guitar pieces to flesh it out a little. Maybe that's getting away from your vision, dunno.

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jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	I wish I had this much talent at your age. Keep it up. I'm glad you are branching out musically and making music that you want to hear, not what you think other people should hear. __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

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right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Piano's fine, but lose the drums completely.

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ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 3,964	I second r-t.

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ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 3,964	Seems sort of...Bland. Great piano piece, but it needs more.

02-09-2008, 10:54 PM	#10 (permalink)
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 3,964	Ah. I'd say try using two quiet guitar pieces to flesh it out a little. Maybe that's getting away from your vision, dunno.