Y0 I made a new song
 

Give me your thoughts.

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I wish I had this much talent at your age. Keep it up. I'm glad you are branching out musically and making music that you want to hear, not what you think other people should hear.

I'm going to fix this and add a layer of several kind of sounding like they're being played far away distorted guitars and I'm also going to re-do the drums so for now tell me how you feel about the piano..

Piano's fine, but lose the drums completely.

I second r-t.

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MySpace.com - Ethan Smith - BELLINGHAM, Washington - Experimental / Ambient / Indie - www.myspace.com/musicethansmith

Its on myspace now.
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Seems sort of...Bland. Great piano piece, but it needs more.

I only have access to piano/drums/guitar/bass. I think some strings would be nice but I can't afford a violin. I can't think of much else to add without it sounding out of place.

Ah. I'd say try using two quiet guitar pieces to flesh it out a little. Maybe that's getting away from your vision, dunno.