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City of Heroes 0 0%
Romola and Rema 0 0%
Aspiring 1 16.67%
Fear of Flying 1 16.67%
The Man in the Garden Swing 3 50.00%
The Patient 1 16.67%
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Old 08-07-2013, 10:16 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Yeah I found The Man in the Garden Swing to be the most coherent. It was well written, fully realised, and absorbing. Honorable mention to The Patient. I liked the general mood and the twist. It just felt a little under-developed. I also liked Fear of Flying but I felt there were too many coincidences to suspend my disbelief. Maybe if the encounter with the ex was a fantasy sequence? I felt otherwise it was a little too convenient.
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