August Creative Writing Competition (Voting Round)

Paedantic Basterd · 08-07-2013, 02:25 PM

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Originally Posted by djchameleon

Any particular reason why?

Stylistically, it was the most intriguing. It opened on a strong sentence, and it was descriptive without being overwrought. I felt like the person who wrote it was a reader of the kinds of novels I really enjoy.

Stephen · 08-07-2013, 11:16 PM

Yeah I found The Man in the Garden Swing to be the most coherent. It was well written, fully realised, and absorbing. Honorable mention to The Patient. I liked the general mood and the twist. It just felt a little under-developed. I also liked Fear of Flying but I felt there were too many coincidences to suspend my disbelief. Maybe if the encounter with the ex was a fantasy sequence? I felt otherwise it was a little too convenient.

Astronomer · 08-08-2013, 02:32 AM

Oooooh these are all so good! I'm impressed! I know which one I wrote (noone's guessed it yet) and I'm trying to figure out who wrote the others...

misspoptart · 08-10-2013, 11:24 AM

Only 5 people have voted! I'm a bit disappointed! Come on people, I wrote you something!

djchameleon · 08-10-2013, 11:41 AM

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Originally Posted by misspoptart

Only 5 people have voted! I'm a bit disappointed! Come on people, I wrote you something!

don't expect any much more than that. The voter turnout isn't usually high. There may end up only be 8 total votes.

Astronomer · 08-10-2013, 07:28 PM

I'm abstaining from voting because I wrote one of the pieces. I wish we had've kept all the authors a secret until the very end though. I'm looking at you, wolvey!

djchameleon · 01-20-2014, 06:59 AM

I'm curious who wrote the other three stories. Well two since I know which one I wrote.

~~James~~ · 01-20-2014, 10:07 AM

Oooh I didn't even know this happened while I was away, very nice to see someone carried it on!

Deviouz · 01-20-2014, 10:09 AM

Wish someone wrote a story on Anal Beads...

djchameleon · 01-20-2014, 10:10 AM

Yeah I think Satchmo attempted to do one also but never posted the results. He just collected the different works.

View Poll Results: Vote
City of Heroes	0	0%
Romola and Rema	0	0%
Aspiring	1	16.67%
Fear of Flying	1	16.67%
The Man in the Garden Swing	3	50.00%
The Patient	1	16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

08-08-2013, 02:32 AM	#23 (permalink)
Astronomer we are stardust Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 2,894	Oooooh these are all so good! I'm impressed! I know which one I wrote (noone's guessed it yet) and I'm trying to figure out who wrote the others... __________________

08-10-2013, 07:28 PM	#26 (permalink)
Astronomer we are stardust Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 2,894	I'm abstaining from voting because I wrote one of the pieces. I wish we had've kept all the authors a secret until the very end though. I'm looking at you, wolvey! __________________

08-07-2013, 11:16 PM	#22 (permalink)
Stephen I sleep in your hat Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Melbourne, Vic. Aus. Posts: 1,847	Yeah I found The Man in the Garden Swing to be the most coherent. It was well written, fully realised, and absorbing. Honorable mention to The Patient. I liked the general mood and the twist. It just felt a little under-developed. I also liked Fear of Flying but I felt there were too many coincidences to suspend my disbelief. Maybe if the encounter with the ex was a fantasy sequence? I felt otherwise it was a little too convenient.

08-10-2013, 11:24 AM	#24 (permalink)
misspoptart gimme gimme Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: istanbul Posts: 897	Only 5 people have voted! I'm a bit disappointed! Come on people, I wrote you something!

01-20-2014, 10:07 AM	#28 (permalink)
~~James~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Scotland Posts: 4,483	Oooh I didn't even know this happened while I was away, very nice to see someone carried it on!

01-20-2014, 10:09 AM	#29 (permalink)
Deviouz Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: With ur mama... Posts: 308	Wish someone wrote a story on Anal Beads...