i dont write poetry, i write reviews their is a big difference. your so up yourself! yeah i need work on my grammar, big deal. let me see how well you can write a review.

You need to take criticism better.

"are you overlooking my work, because you can't think of terms of such expression?"
Lol.

How about giving some constructive criticism or helpful pointers instead of trying to destroy everything Marks says.
Mark has put more effort and worthwhile input into this thread than you have.
As far as the review goes I've seen worse in magazines and online websites, so for a fellow novice it's not all bad.
Lighten up everyone.

We have. He went on a tirade about how we can't comprehend the language he uses.

And your language/grammar is profoundly better?
Talk about the pot calling the kettle black shheesshh!

I forgot one word...And that's not even what he meant by language. See 'melodic exploitation'.

So can you? Comprehend that is.. or are you just too busy nit picking over grammar and such.
Also do you have any reviews on here that I can read out of interest.

have you got any freinds, because who the hell would want to hang around with you. You would bring a dictionary to the party and bore everyone. You would tell them how to spell this or that and waste the life and soul of the party. You need to get a life and get out and enjoy what the world offers. Im still going to write and persue my career in journalism, and narrowmindid people like you are not going to stop me!!!

cheers mate for given my review a chance. im the one who seems to get the backlash in this forum. Thanks again.