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Old 01-20-2011, 02:47 PM   #9 (permalink)
someonecompletelyrandom
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Just please don't try to turn something dull into something exciting by using adjectives. I'm going to come off as a prick by saying this but that's always the case with people who think they can write but can't.

He got the wet and sticky glue all over his hands.

Of course the glue was sticky, it's glue!
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