Untitled 1 (torn apart by yours truly. still sucks, though)

I walked across the barren icy plane,
dragging my heavy feet across the desolate ice sheets, waiting for nothing, going nowhere.
I collapsed, my toes frozen, and my legs shredded in overuse
My heart thudded wildly against the delicate snow
I undressed, and flailed myself unto the crisp white below.
I prepared myself for an eternal sleep, and the world started to blur.
I let the frigid air wrap around my frozen, worn skin, and tighten its grip around my veins,
I looked at the stars above, dancing in the night sky,
Waving farewell to a poor girl's soul.
The sounds were incomprehensible, my heart thudding slower and harder,
I could feel the end coming, and nobody would care,
nobody would ever know.