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David Graey · 11-21-2010, 04:59 PM

Try playing with other types of rhyme, all your current pairings are perfect rhyme (me/lonely, say/sway, etc). Try some other forms of rhyming, and I think it'll help the song become more mature

11-21-2010, 04:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
David Graey Groupie Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: CO Posts: 11	Try playing with other types of rhyme, all your current pairings are perfect rhyme (me/lonely, say/sway, etc). Try some other forms of rhyming, and I think it'll help the song become more mature __________________