You know, I don't really have anything particularly critical so say about any one of your lyrics right now, but I read the start of this yesterday, and then read this page today, and the amount your ability to write has grown is ridiculous. You've gone from slapping down the first thing that comes into your head, which made for an entertaining read, but not for groundbreaking artistry, to the last page, there's a depth to each lyric that definitely wasn't there are the start.
So yeah, basically, keep up the good work!
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