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right-track · 07-11-2005, 03:16 PM

Don't write lyrics myself. So... for what it's worth, I think the song obviously needs a chorus. In between every 8th line would divide it up nicely.
By the way, it gets better each time I read it.

07-11-2005, 03:16 PM	#5 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,769	Don't write lyrics myself. So... for what it's worth, I think the song obviously needs a chorus. In between every 8th line would divide it up nicely. By the way, it gets better each time I read it.