Like the concept, I can relate to your subject because I have problems with being social. At first at this was a song about wishing for ignorance so you don't have to face life's problems because of those lines "Can't we all have your disease, Can't we all shut out the world and forget."... I think I understand your purpose now, though. I would just change the aforementioned lines the "Mr. Man" line.
Good job, I hope to see more from you in the future.
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