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Old 04-10-2010, 10:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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At last, something real with what I'd call proper lyrics.
Straight forward, down to earth and actually pretty good.
I could easily imagine this being a song.

Much better than that poncy, pretentious, emoesque and angst ridden nonsense, written by that Whimper (or is it Kimber?), kid.
I mean, really...what's all that shit about?

On the down side, this song needs a chorus and a bridge.
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