I thought I'd start one, wrote a fair few songs over the past year or so. Thought this would be the place to receive honest opinions whether it be praise or absolutely slating them.
Anyway, a nice simple song to get the ball rolling:
Hey there Mr Lawyer
Where did all your money go?
Did you gamble it away like a Gambling man
Well, I guess you reap what you sew
Hey there Mr Dealer
Are you spendin' the night in jail?
You'll get out and comit another crime
And go back til you're old n frail
Hey there Mr Politician
Sitting there pretending to care
The country's in a state
But that don't matter to you
As long as you get a share
Hey there Mr. Teacher
Making their lives like hell
Does it make you feel like a man?
When you stand there and you yell
As they
Wait for the bell
Hey there Mr Vicar
You're doing the best that you can
Your moral worth is the cream of the crop
But you only preach because you can
Music isn't finalised, working on a solo for it. Your thoughts would be appreciated.
The song is just me basically listing the things that I hate/don't really like. Simplistic but meh, simple easy to understand songs are nice.