RossFrazer

Hey everyone,
First of all, will hopefully be posting here every once in a while, to help out and to post some songs Im writing, who throws round emotion more than a moody teenager, eh?

Well here's really the only song I've really thought about writing properly (not the first song I've ever written, just one I'd think of using).

Cause you're a computer,
Running on a script,
You said you'd break away
And yes, you did...

A hole in your head like no one else,
Cause no body else had just dropped dead,
Hot lead, cures the heavy heart,
Washed it down, with cyanide shots...

You'll never be an individual,
If you don't try to break the chain...

A computer, running on a script,
Let's all go, cut, copy, paste the codes,
Stick to, the given format,
Keep to, the manditory...

You'll never be an individual,
If you can't live to tell the tale...

Cause you're a computer,
Running on a script,
You said you'd break away
And yes, you did...

Any thoughts/constructive criticism?

Thanks

/R.