This is my first post on Music Banter, by the by
. I'm gonna stay using my handle here, but I like nicknames.
These are the lyrics to a song I've posted for critique on Youtube. My username is "TheEuphonies."
Wake up,
My loves
It's a beautiful day
Good for being broken and fading away
Porcelain and fabric, and it's such a show
When they forget themselves and it's you that they throw
Mama says it's a beautiful thing
vacant words and diamond rings
With my
Lion I can rule the world
Nobody now calls me a little girl
Chocolate castles and candy stars
Mama thinks higher of men at the bars
Maybe it's time now to open the door
Maybe this time she'll be the china on my floor.
Wake up
My loves
It's a beautiful time
Good for being broken and made to die
Singsong sweetness, and it's such a sight
When they forget their "love" and they leave the light
Mama wants such vicious things
vacant words and diamond rings
With my
Lion I can rule the world
Nobody now calls me a little girl
Chocolate castles and candy stars
Mama thinks higher of men at the bars
Maybe it's time now to open the door
Maybe this time she'll be the china on my floor.
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Critiques would be appreciated very much on here and on Youtube.