It's not "Displace", it's "disgrace". And that line seems a little awkward.
I also don't think that you should repeat that part so very much. But that's not that big a deal.
I think that you have half-decent lyrics, but so much depends on the music. As a poem, it doesn't really work because I haven't gotten to know either of these characters. For instance, we really don't know very much about the girl at all. All we know is that he dumped her, and that he's sorry he did. But we don't know who she is. We don't know the color of her hair, the way she moves, all the things a little coward boy would think of, or at least that I think he'd think of.
But as a song, you can get away with things like that if the music's good enough.
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