lol i can hear the beat to this song building in my mind. It has potential.
but anyways, its a good starts. Personally i would use what you have as a verse as a prechorus. or perhaps even the chorus. itself. It does have the feeling of being a little redundant. But honestly, put this song to some guitar and some drums and you could have a new hit song
. Very well written with the exception of the repetitiveness. Keep writing, you may find yourself with something fantastic.
Cheers!