The song's really not bad, but here's my general advice.
First of all, sing from your gut, and not from your nose. If you hold your nose while you're singing and sound like you have a cold, that's how you know you're too nasaly. Try it.
If you're having a hard time with that, I'll cover your song for you and send it back. I'll cover it the way you're singing and the way you can change it.
Second of all. The lyrics are simple. There's nothing special about them.
There's nothin wrong with the.
Honestly, after I heard the video, I minded them less.
Third of all, you're great with playing your chords, they're clean cut and well played.
I've been playing for a while now, and even I have a hard time with playing that way sometimes.
Overall, it wasn't that bad, though.
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