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Old 11-10-2009, 10:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
OceanAndSilence
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your songs are fine in structure, really... you just need to refine your vocals. work on intonation and clarity... some lyrics are good but a lot of the time i cannot hear them clearly. there's also no conviction in your voice... say that **** like you mean it dude!
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