The words are what throw me off. I'm not saying its bad, just doesn't jive for me. (one of the only times ived used the word jive!!!) If i look past the words I can see a really cool piece with a lot of potential, but with them, it just looks like you kinda got tired of the project and slapped them on there so you could be done. Its a unity thing. just sayin
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"Not remotely! Because iocaine comes from Australia, as everyone knows. And Australia is entirely peopled with criminals. And criminals are used to having people not trust them as you are not trusted by me, so I can clearly not choose the wine in front of you."
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