Someone meshed Lamars threads together rather poorly. I now look like a poor sap whose talking to himself, ha.
Reading these other poems, I do like what you're doing, but I think they're a tad too simple and are a little too repetative. I mean, begining one song/poem with all the same word/phrase is alright, but there is a habit forming here.
JMO
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