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mr dave · 08-26-2009, 04:59 PM

so first off you claim you're not like all the others then spit out a diatribe like... all the others. your words have the illest of meaning?.....

stampeed is spelled stampede.

faze is not a word. phase is.

feining? isn't a real word either - feigning (faking) doesn't work in that sentence either, but reeling would.

unnoticed like the D in DAMN? uhh... the N is the unnoticed letter in that word.

there is indicative, like a place you go to. their is possessive, like something someone else owns.

running with a pact? you run with a contract?

were means the past version of being. we're means we are.

equipped with deals for explosives? so you have the ability to cause paper cuts?

ready to kill guns set on focus? what?

to is something you do. too is how much of it you do.

you want to claim to be different than the norm then step up and provide something unique as opposed to yet another 'look at how tough me and my boys are' raps. like 99% of all the other wannabes out there. a little less time with the metaphysical c*ck measuring contest and a little more time tackling the grade 3 grammatical issues you're facing and you might be able to put together something decent.