You hit the nail on the head so to speak about my insomnia poem/song. I will be changing it up abit before i submit it to the band for instrumental work.
As far as my music genre goes i totally agree that it really doesnt seem to fit the thrash genre my fellow bandmates would like to see themselves as. To tell you the truth i think our band fits in more with the likes of Trivium, which is a great metal band. I see us more of a metalcore/melodic metal band, lyrics seem to still not fit but i think thats what makes us more appealing. If you checkout Triviums song "THROES OF PERDITION" thats more along the lines of the sound we have. Pay attention to the chorus because thats the best part of the song...
As far as Dead Darling and Insomnia goes, i was going for a softer sound. Not really sure if ill even put music to those right now. Just some thoughts swirling in my head. Thanks for the reply glad to see someones reading my thoughtless banter