Thanks for commenting. I definetely need help with my chorus in the last song The Dance. It was kind of forced and I'm not used to writing choruses at all! Just some general tips or specific line changes, even a theme change suggestion would be appreciated. My bands basest is very good for the amount of time he's been playing so our songs tend to have a fun base part that he likes to play loudly (not too loudly, just enough to give us a unique sound) and he solos quite often. Our current guitarist is ok, but he's really just a beginner, and our other guitarist is very talented but a bit flakey and shy about his genius. So our guitar parts are usually ok but not astounding. If you want to hear our music just go to Myspace and search Snow State. Even if you google us our myspace comes up on the first page. We only have one song recorded right now, but its ok. It barely has any guitar at all because the guy who recorded it for us was a total stoner and decided that it wasn't good the way we play it live.
Oh, by the way, the song we have on the myspace (Stop Here) wasn't really written by me. I put in my two cents, but my fellow singer wrote the lyrics, and as previously mentioned, I don't really have much use as a riff-maker-upper.
Anyway, give us a listen and maybe then you can hear the lyrics in your head and give me some pointers! thanks a bunch!
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