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inthepink · 08-11-2009, 06:01 PM

I agree with veggielover. Also, the whole rythmic thing is a bit off. Try cutting out the words you don't need. Other than that, I'm excited to see how the whole thing will sound!!

08-11-2009, 06:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
inthepink Groupie Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2	I agree with veggielover. Also, the whole rythmic thing is a bit off. Try cutting out the words you don't need. Other than that, I'm excited to see how the whole thing will sound!!