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Old 05-22-2009, 10:23 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Stone Birds View Post
Very good (sorry i couldn't give one of your long smart responses)
If I were to ask for any critique, it would be on which lines seem cliché
, or just don't flow to you.
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