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holynapkin · 04-20-2009, 06:23 PM

The second paragraph has no flow at all. I am sorry but those lyrics cannot be sung.

Even if it was poetry, it still lacks anything that would deem it so. It seems more like a cruddy letter written to someone.

But, whatever, to each his own.

04-20-2009, 06:23 PM	#47 (permalink)
holynapkin Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 26	The second paragraph has no flow at all. I am sorry but those lyrics cannot be sung. Even if it was poetry, it still lacks anything that would deem it so. It seems more like a cruddy letter written to someone. But, whatever, to each his own.