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Old 03-12-2009, 11:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
Tead
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Umm I'd say 6.5-7.
Don't take it bad, haha, I'm a nobody but it feels a little forced and I'm not a big fan of a lot of questions in a work.
I really like the imagery and your use with words, but it is a bit much, and sometimes less is more.
Hopefully my critique was useful xD
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