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Freebase Dali · 03-11-2009, 06:51 PM

I like the concept, but it feels like you just wrote a rhyme for children.
Maybe you could work on your delivery?
I dunno, just an idea.

03-11-2009, 06:51 PM	#7 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	I like the concept, but it feels like you just wrote a rhyme for children. Maybe you could work on your delivery? I dunno, just an idea.