I want constructive critisism, please.
His Terminal Monomania
A content comatose
He is dying to obtain
Searching for cause
There is no reason
His closer allies,
His beautiful value
Fades away and atrophies
His desire and his decay
Unwilling to surrender him
Have intercourse and multiply
He ascends upward
to a miserable bliss
on pink fluffy clouds
Expended relations,
and traded possessions
He observes the milieu,
Felo-de-se
In that minute
The world had lost
His carnal remains