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aveneficus · 02-10-2009, 08:22 PM

this is extremely wordy, but other than not entirely understanding what you're trying to say it isn't bad.
The last stanza is brilliant though

02-10-2009, 08:22 PM	#86 (permalink)
aveneficus Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Cincinnati, OH Posts: 44	this is extremely wordy, but other than not entirely understanding what you're trying to say it isn't bad. The last stanza is brilliant though __________________ If dreams are like movies, then memories are films about ghosts