Great review! I thought it was really good ..
Normally, I wouldn't write constructive feedback, but since you're a writer, there is some info I'm missing. First off, is the band called MRI or is it an acronym? And also, is this the band's debut album?
In addition to a song for song review, I like it when there are just a few thoughts or impressions from the album as a whole ..
I hope you don't take take my feedback the wrong way. It's not intended as that at all. I consider some of the reviews on MB to be real treasures and yours is a really good contribution and an enjoyable read.
Grats on your first review!