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Lutherfish · 02-05-2009, 07:39 PM

I like it. But I think that for it to be a song, you should maybe put more words in there for syllabic consistancy.
It just kind of drops near the end.

02-05-2009, 07:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
Lutherfish Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 20	I like it. But I think that for it to be a song, you should maybe put more words in there for syllabic consistancy. It just kind of drops near the end. __________________ stimmt